May 19, 2010

Y1 ZOO Trip

Say, Phoenix, Co and Christine went to the Zoo last Friday. This is what they wrote about their trip in their ESOL class:
I saw a spider monkey. It was brown. It was on the monkey bar. It fell down. I saw a lion. The lion was eating. I saw a rhino. It was big. I saw I hippo. It was brown.

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